Question

短文改错（满分10分）文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was raining. In his way home from school Peter saw an old man walking with difficult in the rain without a umbrella. Peter went up to him and offered share the umbrella with him. The old man in poor health, so Peter tried to hold the umbrella. But he was so short to hold it high enough. While wondered what to do, he saw the old man's stick and had an idea. He had tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made them longer. Now we shared the umbrella. Peter was happy.

Answer 1

小题1:In—On
小题2:difficult—difficulty
小题3:a—an
小题4:offered后加to
小题5:man后加was；
小题6:so---too
小题7:wondered—wondering
小题8:去掉had
小题9:them—it
小题10:we—they

试题分析：
小题1:on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
小题2: with difficulty费力地
小题3:umbrella是元音开头的单词，用不定冠词an
小题4:offer to do sth主动提出做…
小题5:in poor health是介词短语，不能做谓语，要加was；
小题6:这里是too…to…结构
小题7:while wondering="while" he was wondering
小题8:tie和make是并列的动作，都是过去时
小题9:指代：the umbrella用it
小题10:指代Peter和the old man用they
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。