Question

北京教育考试学院于10月21日公布2016年高考英语学科总分值由150分降到100分。这件事情引起了人们的热议。请你根据所给信息写一篇英文报道。

赞成	有助于减轻学生学习负担，更好学习其它科目。同时，英语的提高可在大学。
反对	英语是国际语言，是了解世界的重要工具，与世界接轨，必须强化英语学习。
你的观点	……

 注意： 1）开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
2）不要逐条翻译，但可适当增加内容以便行文连贯。
3）词数在120左右。
On October 21st, Beijing Educational Examination Yuan declared that in Beijing the total score of English in the 2016 College Entrance Examination would be declined from 150 to 100, which arouses a heated discussion…
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Answer 1

On October 21st, Beijing Educational Examination Yuan declared that in Beijing the total score of English in the 2016 College Entrance Examination will be declined from 150 to 100, which arouses a heated discussion. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people think the policy will contribute to reduce the study pressure of the high school students, providing students with more time to learn other subjects especially our mother language Chinese. Additionally, a good command of English can be achieved in university instead of at high school. On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion that since English has become an international language, that is, a practical language tool, English learning must be strengthened to keep pace with other developed countries during the economical and cultural globalization age.
As for me, I strongly support the former idea. As is known to us ,English is widely used in international business negotiation and conference. However, not all of us but some talents have the opportunity to get involved in them. Thus it is unnecessary for each student to devote most valuable time to it . Moreover, the score decline doesn’t mean we totally ignore English, but does adjust the model of English teaching and learning . Hopefully ,the policy will benefit our English learners.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些比较常见的短语instead of代替而不是； that is 也就是说On the other hand 另一方面；As is known to 众所周知；devote time to 专心于某事。Some people think the policy will contribute to reduce the study pressure of the high school students, providing students with more time to learn other subjects especially our mother language Chinese这个句子中providing表示伴随状语，provide sb with sth 提供某人某物。As is known to us ,English is widely used in international business negotiation and conference这个句子中as引导非限制性定语从句，widely用来修饰动词used.
考点： 提纲类作文