Question

请写一篇120词左右的英语短文，分析越来越多的中学生玩微博的原因和利弊。

注意  1）开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数    2）书写清楚,卷面整洁

Micro blogs have become part of our lives and bring lots of benefits. …

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In my opinion，we should be careful and cautious while using micro blogs.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Micro blogs have become part of our lives and bring lots of benefits. It’s convenient for students to express feelings. Using micro blogs, they can not only share their ideas and experiences but also ask for help or seek comfort when in trouble. In other words, micro blogs provide a good place to reduce pressure. Besides, it’s an effective way to improve writing skills. You have to learn to write in a style that appeals to more readers to keep reading.

On the other hand, micro blogs may also affect students’ studies and normal lives. Some teenagers lack self-control and can easily become addicted to blogging. They spend too much time on blogs just for fun or to follow the fashion. They may even be misled or cheated by harmful contents if they cannot tell the difference between fantasy and real life.

In my opinion, we should be careful and cautious while using micro blogs.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文讨论的话题是微博的利弊。考生可以从微博给人一个空间表达自己的观点，可以让人从中得到安慰，减压等方面着手。也可以讲述很多人玩微博上瘾，把太多的时间花在了微博上，导致学习或者工作出现问题。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。