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书面表达(注意卷面整洁)

当今社会，有些家长由于忙于工作无暇顾及孩子，从而选择用金钱的方式奖励孩子在学习上的进步和成就。请你用英语写一篇120词左右的短文分析产生这种现象的原因并表达你的看法。

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　　In modern times, more and more parents devote their energy to their career due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children．Many of them choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies．

　　However, I don't think this is a practical and proper way．Firstly, if the children are always rewarded with money when they get high marks, their attention will focus on money instead of the pleasure of studying．Some of them will stop working hard as soon as they get what they want．Secondly, too much money will spoil the children, for they are too young to make good use of the money．I think a hug and a kiss will work better for children than money．