Question

假设你是李华，在一个礼品网站为你的姐姐订购了一份生日礼物。礼物是一个标有姓名、生日及祝福语的有卡通动物形象的粉色杯子。收到礼物后你和姐姐都很满意。请给你的英国笔友Johnson发一封邮件，内容包括以下要点：

1.描述网购的礼物； 2.介绍网上支付及配送情况； 3.谈谈你对网上购物的看法。

注意：1.词数120--150左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

      3.支付宝安全控件 Alipay Security Control

Dear Johnson,

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua                                                 

 

Answer 1

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One possible version

Dear Johnson,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.

Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?

I have enjoyed shopping online very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet. Agree with me?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

                                                      Yours sincerely,

                                                            Li Hua

 

【解析】略