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最近的一份调查表明中国青少年的体质明显下降，青少年的健康问题日益受到社会的关注。请根据下列提示，以“The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern”为题，写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
1．现状：青少年体质明显下降，有许多诸如肥胖、近视等健康问题；
2．原因：作业负担过重，睡眠不足，缺乏锻炼；
3．建议：改革现行教育制度，减轻学生负担，使学生有更多睡眠和锻炼的时间。
参考词汇：肥胖 obesity 近视short-sightedness 改革 reform

Answer 1

The health of Chinese youngsters—a big concern
As a latest survey shows , the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined．Many Chinese students are facing a number of physical problems, such as obesity, and short-sightedness, etc．How has this situation come about?
Under the current educational system, marks seem to mean everything to students．To pass the college entrance examination, students have to spend most of their time in doing endless homework．As a result, they do not sleep or exercise enough．
To improve students’ health, we should reform the current educational system．Besides, we call for less homework, thus leaving students more time to sleep and take exercise．Only in this way can the health of youngsters be greatly improved．

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