Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

During the past years of high school, I have had a lot of unforgettable

experience. One of them when my class prepared to a group singing competition of our

school. In order to win competition, we went all out for it. During the two weeks before

the competition, we use every chance to practice singing in our free time, and our music

teacher offered to helping us improve our singing skills. Although the job needed lots of

time and patience, but every participant took it serious and did their best. Thank to our

hard work, we won first prize. Hearing the excited news, we were all wild with joy. The

moment we got the prize, an old say hit y mind ----No pains, no gains.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 experience改为experiences

 to 改为 for

 win后面加the

 use改为 used

 helping改为help

 but去掉

 serious 改为seriously

 Thank改为Thanks

 excited 改为exciting

 say 改为 saying

【解析】

试题分析：

 这里的experience是“经历”的意思，是可数名词，改为experiences

 考查词组：prepare for为…做准备，to 改为 for

 这里是特指这场歌唱比赛，win后面加the

 这篇文章用的是过去时：use改为 used

 考查词组：offer to do sth主动提出做…,helping改为help

 Although 不能和but连用，but去掉

 考查词组：take sth seriously认真对待…。

 考查词组： Thanks to多亏了

 考查形容词：修饰news用exciting

 考查名词：saying说法，an old saying一句俗语：say 改为 saying

考点：考查短文改错

点评：考查考生对全文的理解和在上下文中运用语法的能力和上下文串联的理解力。特别是名词的单复数，形容词副词的变化和固定搭配。