Question

【题目】书面表达

近期，山西某校组织高二学生进行了一场讨论。主题是：高三年要不要集中进行晚自习。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇120字左右的英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。

开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开关已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school. The students were questioned whether they were willing to have the evening self-study at school or not. Here is the result according to the survey.

60 percent of the students think it’s a good idea to have the evening self-study at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.

There are 25 percent of the students who think they prefer to study at home. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.

At the same time, still 15 percent of the students don’t have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening self-study if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语a heated discussion激烈的讨论；according to根据；do better in在某方面做的更好；with the help of在.....的帮助下；concentrate on集中；prefer to偏爱；At the same time于此同时；do well做的好。