Question

16．假设你叫李华，暑假期间在纽约旅游时借宿在爸爸的朋友格林先生家，请根据下列提示，写一封电子邮件谢谢格林先生一家的招待．
1．谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾；
2．感谢他们陪你练习英语口语；
3．欢迎他们来中国旅游．
注意：
1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右．
Dear Mr．& Mrs．Green，
          ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封感谢信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般过去时态来叙述他们对自己的关爱．内容主要有：一 点名写信目的；二 谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾；三 感谢他们陪你练习英语口语；四 欢迎他们来中国旅游．
高分句型：
1．I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Green，which made my journey more unforgettable．句子里which引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句表达的这件事．
我喜欢格林夫人做的菜，这让我的旅行更加难忘．
2．In addition，I really appreciate your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English．句子里In addition表示"此外"，和上一段进行递进；appreciate one's doing表示"感激某人做了某事"； make great progress 表示"取得很大进步"．
此外，我真的感激你陪我练习口语，我的口语取得很大进步

解答 Dear Mr．& Mrs．Green，
    I am writing to thank you for your warm hospitality which I enjoyed when I was in New York．（写信的目的）
    It was very kind of you to offer me a comfortable and clean room in your house when I was in New York．I like the delicious food cooked by Mrs Green，which made my journey more unforgettable．【高分句型一】Hopefully，I can have the chance to taste it in the future．（谢谢格林先生和夫人的热情款待及照顾）
    In addition，I really appreciate your practicing oral English with me and I have made great progress in my spoken English．【高分句型二】The stay in New York has greatly enriched my experience and widely broadened my horizon．（感谢他们陪你练习英语口语）
    I really hope you can come to China for a visit when it is convenient for you．（欢迎他们来中国旅游）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
这几年全国卷的作文主要是考查一些实用文，例如邀请信；申请信；感谢信等等，而这些文体都有固定的格式，平时注意总结和记忆．