Question

文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:  1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it．One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden．Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target．When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had．“How far away are you? Two feet?” But Bill said he was 50 yards away．
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole．He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of wood．He put it in the garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole．Then he drew a target round a hole．”

Answer 1

【小题1】shoot –shooting
【小题2】was 去掉或者was前加上who /that
【小题3】ago—before
【小题4】but ---and
【小题5】.shot at it 去掉at
【小题6】are --- were
【小题7】 explained 和Jack 中间加to
【小题8】He ----She
【小题9】yard—yards
【小题10】a ---the

解析【小题1】shoot –shooting  考查enjoy doing 喜欢做某事。比尔很喜欢射击。
【小题2】was 去掉或者was前加上who /that  题意为 一个叫杰克的朋友来参观他的房子。Named 分词做后置定语修饰friend .
【小题3】ago—before 他的朋友几天前看见他在花园里面放的靶子。Several days before 几天前。
【小题4】but ---and 他走近看到中间有个洞。Went 与saw 之间是并列关系，故改为and 。
【小题5】shot at it 去掉at  题意为 杰克问谁射中的。Shoot at sth 瞄准。Shoot sth 射中某物。
【小题6】are --- were 杰克问，有多远。这事发生在过去，故应用一般过去时。
【小题7】 explained 和Jack 中间加to 考查explain sth to sb 向某人解释某事。
【小题8】He ----She 根据上文，他的妻子解释到，比尔去商店买了块木头，把他放在花园里，离50码开始瞄准。此处指他的妻子，故用she
【小题9】yard—yards  50码 数字后的名词必须用复数，故加s
【小题10】a ---the 题意 然后他围绕着这个洞画了个靶子。特指这个洞。
考点 短文改错