Question

19．请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文．
A life without a goal is a life without hope．
注意：①无须写标题；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称；
⑤词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题类作文．请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文．A life without a goal is a life without hope．需要写的话题已经给出，要求内容必须结合生活中的一个事例写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．一定要给出自己的看法．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色．注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少．重点短语：
used to （曾经…）；fall behind（落后）； help sb out（帮助某人摆脱困境）；set up（设定）；have an urge to（渴望做…）；full of （充满）
高分句型：
1．Goals of life determine what we are going to be．本句含有一个宾语从句；
2．It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out．本句含有一个强调句；
3．I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away．本句含有一个宾语从句．

解答 As John Ruskin puts it，"Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass"．Goals of life determine what we are going to be．（高分句型1）
   I used to be so addicted to computer games that I had little time for study and thus fell behind．My parents and teachers were greatly worried about me．It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out．（高分句型2）She told me hat I must have my own goal of life，otherwise my future would be hopeless and that playing computer games was fun but it wouldn't guarantee me a bright future．I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away．（高分句型3）In the days that followed，whenever I felt tired or had an urge to play computer games，I thought of my goal and soon regain strength．
   As the saying goes，a life without a goal is a life without hope．Bearing my goal of life in mind，I am always full of energy in my study．

点评 话题类作文在写作时要注意内容是否切合所给主题，包含所给要点，写作时注意正确运用时态，上下文注意连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要注意积累短语和重要句型．