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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The Great Wall is a great military fortification project in China that was regarded as a miracle in the history of ancient architecture. It went through more 2,500 years of the Chinese history but bestrides the vast terrain over a dozen of provinces in northern China. Although it has lost the its military value for a long time, it nevertheless reflects the dignity, confident, and independence of the Chinese people.

In 1987, UNESCO listed the Great Wall by a World Heritage Site. The Great Wall is a must-visit site for tourists worldwide where they come to China and Beijing. More of them put on T-shirts with Mao Zedong’s poetry said “You are not a man until you climbed up the Great Wall” when they happily climb the step of the Great Wall. The experience becomes unforgettable.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.考查动词。本句说的是一般状况，要用一般现在时态，故将was改为is.

2.考查连词。固定短语：more than（超过），故加than.

3.考查连词。句意：它有2500多年的历史，并且跨越了中国北部几个省。前后是并列关系，没有转折之意，应该用and连接，故将but改为and.

4.考查冠词。名词value之前已经有了物主代词its修饰，不能再用定冠词the，故去掉the.

5.考查名词。此处要用名词confidence（信心）与其它名词dignity，independence并列，故将confident改为confidence.

6.考查介词。句意：在1987年，联合国教科文组织把它列作为世界文化遗产。应该用介词 as（作为），故将by改为as.

7.考查连词。句意：当游客们来到中国和北京时，长城是他们必到之处。应该用when引导时间状语从句，故将where改为when.

8.考查代词。固定搭配：many of them（他们中许多人），more是“更多”的意思，故将more改为many.

9.考查动词。此处要用现在分词saying作状语，与主语many of them是主动关系，故将said改为saying.

10.考查名词。名词step是可数名词，此处指长城上的“台阶”要用复数形式，故将step改为steps.