Question

【题目】As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, completely ignoring others.

This is really a common phenomena in our life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.

As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study. Meanwhile, care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

Answer 1

【答案】1.attending to meetings中to去掉

2.addicting改成addicted

3.phenomena改成phenomenon

4.why改成that

5.kept改成keep

6.Therefore改成However

7.are改成is

8.these改成those

9.help their之间加with

10.much改成more

【解析】本文为议论文。文章论述了人们沉迷于手机的原因及自己的观点。

第一处：attending to meetings中to去掉；考查动词词性。attend意为“参加”，为及物动词，其后to多余，故attending to meetings中to去掉。

第二处：addicting改成addicted；考查非谓语动词。addicted“上瘾的，迷恋的”，be addicted to“对……上瘾”。句意：你总是会发现他们痴迷于手机，完全忽视他人，故addicting改成addicted。

第三处：phenomena改成phenomenon；考查名词复数形式。句意：这在我们的生活中是一个很普遍的现象。phenomena为复数，单数形式为phenomenon。故phenomena改为phenomenon。

第四处：why改成that；考查固定句型。句意：这是因为智能手机可以被用来玩游戏等。固定句型：the reason is that…“原因是……”，故why改为that。

第五处：kept改成keep；考查动词形式。此处为and连接两个并列的动词不定式，故kept改为keep。

第六处：Therefore改成However；考查副词。句意：然而，过多使用手机对孩子的健康有害。根据句意可知，此处应为转折关系，故Therefore 改为However。

第七处：are改成is；考查主谓一致。too much exposure to phones为不可数名词短语作主语，谓语动词应用单数，故are改为is。

第八处：these改成those；考查代词。此处应用代词those代替周边的那些人，而不是这些人，故these改为those。

第九处：help与their之间加with；考查介词搭配。句意：人们应该使用手机来帮助其工作和学习。help with sth．在某事上帮忙，故在help和their work之间加with。

第十处：much改成more；考查比较级。句意：与此同时，多多关注他们的家人和朋友，而不是手机。故much改为more。