Question

第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
When I was a little girl ,my mother always told me what I should do and not .What I can remember is that when I was in the primary school, I didn’t want to go to school because I hated the math teacher who used to punish me for I didn’t finish my homework on time. Instead of forcing me to go to school, my mother just told me if I didn’t go to school my friends and my teachers would not like me anymore. What’s more, she told me I should not hate the math teacher on account of my fault and never hate anybody if I wanted to be likable. Since that time, I have known that being likable is very important.
While I was growing up, I read a lot of books in order to be a likable person. There is a famous writer, Dale Carnegie. He wrote a book called How to Win Friends and Influence People, which taught me a lot .Being a likable person we should respect others and become genuinely interested in other people. In my opinion, the most significant one is that we should be honest and sincere. The second way is that we should be glad to give them a hand when it is needed. Finally, I suppose that being a good listener is quite important as well. We should participate in their suffering and encourage them in time.
In a word, only if we stand by the people even when they are in the darkest time and never desert them can we be a likable in the social life.
[写作内容]
1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2) 然后以约120个词就“做个受欢迎的人”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：
A ) 以自己或他人的经历为例谈谈怎样才能得到别人的认可。
B ) 你认为如何才能使自己受欢迎，为什么？
[写作要求]
1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2) 标题自定
[评分标准]
概括准确、语言规范、内容合适，篇章连贯。
[写作要求]
1.   作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.   作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]                  概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

Answer 1

The author relates to us how he realized the importance of being likable through his experience. Besides, Carnegie’s book confirms him of the essence of being likable: modesty, sincerity, honesty and helpfulness. (32 words)
I remember clearly how I change my attitude towards the most popular girl, Cathy. At first, I was jealous of her because of her popularity. But one incident made me admire her.  As a guy pursuing uniqueness, I always wore a strange hat to school, which aroused the others’ dislike. But she wrote a diary posted on our wallpaper to support my eccentricity. In it, she expressed her understanding and asked our classmates to focus more on my genuineness than my strange appearance. Since then, I regard her as my confidant.
It is evident that to be a likable person, one needs to show interest and understanding towards others. First, be concerned with what others are passionate about. Then another significant quality for a popular person is to remember what’s important to people. In addition, to gain likability, one should not grudge complimentary words to friends. (146 words)

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