Question

10．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
　　People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate．You can set the example by becoming the person that people want to be like．You can help change the world by changing yourself．
　　注意：
　　①无须写标题；
　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；
　　③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；
　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
　　⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文，写作时注意以下几点：1．准确理解这句话People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate．You can set the example by becoming the person that people want to be like．You can help change the world by changing yourself．2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：follow the example of 学习…的榜样，照…的样子；效仿；can't help doing sth．忍不住做某事；look down upon 轻视，看不起；day by day 一天一天地；
Such is human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life，holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol．（高分句型一） 
Having failed the entrance exam，I was admitted to an ordinary high school，which disappointed me a lot．（高分句型二）

解答 Such is human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life，holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol．（高分句型一） However，we can set the example by changing ourselves and becoming the person we want to be．
    I can't help recalling the time when I first entered high school．Having failed the entrance exam，I was admitted to an ordinary high school，which disappointed me a lot．（高分句型二）I was very bitter and rude，looking down upon everyone at school．Then one day I told myself I couldn't be like this any longer．Maybe I shouldn't look for someone to admire but should change myself first．I tried to improve myself a bit and tried to be friendlier to others．As a result，I found myself a lot happier and I was even awarded the title of"Excellent Student"at the end of term．
     Life is a constant exercise in self-improvement．Changing yourself to a better self is definitely better than looking for someone better to imitate．Change yourself，and you will make the earth a better world day by day．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧