Question

假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。

要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象；

　　　2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述；

　　　3. 对他李华表示美好的的祝愿。

注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。

????? 2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

????? 3. 开头已给出。

Dear Li Hua,

?? It’s time to say goodbye. ________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

?? It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need.

?? Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.

?? I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!

??????????????????????????????????????????????? Yours,

???????????????????????????????????????????????????? Wang Ping

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文写作，重点考查考生的书面表达的能力。毕业留言的话题应该是中学生熟悉，有话可写的素材，因此难度并不大。把握三个要点：1.简要表述李华在你心目中的印象;2.用一到两个相关的事例进行具体描述; 3.对他李华表示美好的的祝愿。注意组织锻炼和过渡。考生在写作时，一定要紧扣写作要点进行写作，三个要点都十分重要，如果考生能够在紧扣写作要点的基础上，抓住语言的准确性，再写出几个亮点词汇和句式，得到高分应该比较轻松。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言流畅，句式变化多样：It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. 这句话用了固定句型和定语从句，You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. 这句话用了定语从句和省略句，You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. 这句话用了定语从句和宾语从句， When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. 这句话用了强调句， Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. 这句话用了虚拟语气， May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!这两句话都用了虚拟语气。

考点：考查提纲类书面表达