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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a small child，my parents didn’t have many money and I had very few Christmas gifts. My cousin was ten and he had gone out singing Christmas songs and made quite a bit money. Without tell anyone he went to the shop and spent almost every penny of his money in a teddy bear. Then he was used the change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming (迷人的) heart on them. He came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these things for me as Christmas gift. Twenty-five years later the teddy bear has been thrown away, but I even have the little necklace in my jewelry box to remind me of my cousin kindness.

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【解析】考查形容词。修饰不可数名词应使用much，故将many改为much。

考查固定短语。a bit of一点，修饰不可数名词，故填加of。

考查动名词。介词后应使用动名词，故将tell改为telling。

考查固定用法。spend time on sth.在某事上花费时间或spend time in doing sth.花费时间做某事。故将介词in改为on。

考查语态。句意：然后他使用零钱买个一条项链，有一颗迷人的心形玻璃镶嵌在上面。故去掉was。

考查代词。指代前面提到necklace，故将代词them改为it。

考查宾语从句。宾语从句中不缺少句子成分，故将what改为that或去掉。

考查名词复数。根据“these things”，故将gift改为gifts。

考查副词。even甚至，即使；still仍然。根据句意：二十五年后，泰迪熊被扔掉了，但是那条项链仍然在我的珠宝盒里。根据题意，故将even改为still。

考查形容词性物主代词。修饰名词kindness，应使用形容词性物主代词，故将cousin改为cousin’s。