Question

下面的饼状图（pie chat）显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文，报道你的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。字数120词左右。首句已给出（不计入词数）。

A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.                         
                                                       
                                                                           

Answer 1

A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time. From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sportsis the most popular activity in our school. The second popular activity for students issurfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, take reading as a hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.
In my point of view, our school should have more sports facilities built to satisfy the need of the students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.

解析试题分析：看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图表用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图表中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。本文是对学生的兴趣爱好的调查，是一篇议论文，应该使用一般现在时的时态，使用第三人称。要特别注意百分数的表达方法，可以直接使用数字来表达。如53% of the students，也可以转换成英语表达。在方便个人观点的时候，可以建议父母亲或者老师对于学生如何度过自己的业余时间给出一些建议和指导。
【亮点说明】本文中的运用了一些高级的句式，如so doing sportsis the most popular activity in our school中使用了动名词在句中做主语，表示经常性习惯性的行为。The second popular activity for students issurfing the Internet中也使用了动名词做表语的结构。
考点：考察图表类短文写作