Question

IV 写作(共2题，满分40分)
第一节基础写作(共1题，满分15分)
你的笔友William回复你的电子邮件告诉你英国高中生课余时间可以打工，其内容要点如下：

英国高中生	1. 可以打工，每天不超过三小时，晚上不得迟于七点； 2. 一星期18小时以内。
William的看法	1. 可获得生活中一些技能，如填表、应对面试和与人相处； 2. 增强自信和独立性，学会如何理财； 3. 有利学习和工作责任心。

[写作内容]
假设你是李华，请根据以上信息，以William的口吻将这些信息转写成一封信，内容包括：
1. 英国15岁以上的高中生课余可以打工；
2. 高中生课余打工的时限规定；
3. 你(William)的看法。
[写作要求]    
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
2.开头和结尾已写出，不讲入总句数。
[评分标准]    句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性、连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days.
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Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

Answer 1

[one possible version]
Dear Li Hua,
Very glad to have received your email. Now I’ll tell you what I am doing during my unlimited time these days. In the UK, any secondary student over 15 years old can get a job legally in his unlimited time. Students, who can work as long as they work no more than three hours a day and 18 hours a week during the school year, can’t work past 7:00 pm during school year.
I guess, first of all, jobs can teach teenagers work skills they will need their whole lives, such as how to fill out an application, how to interview well and how to get along with co-workers and superiors. What’s more, jobs can help us teens not only feel more confident and independent but also develop a sense of responsibility for our courses and work. The most important of all, Jobs help us teens learn to manage our money in our life.
Best wishes to you and looking forwards to your early reply.
Yours,
William Dickens

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