Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel with any luggage. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

Answer 1

【小题1】buy → buying
【小题2】here → there
【小题3】long 前加a
【小题4】but → and
【小题5】on → in
【小题6】was → were
【小题7】with → without
【小题8】friend → friend’s
【小题9】去掉 to
【小题10】feel → felt

解析试题分析：我的暑假旅行一开始很糟糕。我打算先去杭州的一个朋友那，然后再去厦门，但是买票时不小心被人偷了行李，所有的衣服都在里面，幸好钱还在身上。一直到了朋友家我才可以换换朋友的衣服。
【小题1】buying在这里表伴随状语。
【小题2】我去杭州，当然应该是看望那里的朋友。
【小题3】 holiday是可数名词，当然要用a 表一个。
【小题4】 我买了票，转身拿包，前后是并列关系，应该用and。
【小题5】我所以的钱都在口袋里。所以用in。
【小题6】clothes做主语，谓语应该用复数were。
【小题7】旅行不带行李很奇怪，所以用without。
【小题8】到达朋友的家，应该是用：名词’s，所以是friend’s。
【小题9】借给某人某物是：lend sb. sth., 所以去掉 to。
【小题10】全文都用过去时讲述过去的一件事，所以这里还应该是用过去式felt以保持时态的一致性。
考点：短文改错。