Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你班外教Mr.Smith任教期满即将回美国。全班同学为他挑选了一个具有中国特色的礼物。作为班长，你代表全班同学把礼物赠送给他，并给他留了一封信，内容包括：

1.感激之情；2.礼物寓意；3.美好祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, monitor of the class. Hearing that you are leaving China soon, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude to you for your excellent work representing the class.

Thanks to your generous help as well as your great devotion and efforts, we’ve become more interested and done better in our English, which will be of great importance to our further study. Mr. Smith, here’s a Chinese knot, a souvenir that we’ve specially prepared for you. Hopefully you’ll like it. This knot stands for reunion, friendship, love and good fortune. What makes it special is that we’ve all signed on it, making it a good reminder of the happy time we spent together.

Now, I’d also like to wish you a pleasant journey home and always young and happy! Please remember that you are always welcome to come back to visit us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，你班外教Mr.Smith任教期满即将回美国。全班同学为他挑选了一个具有中国特色的礼物。作为班长，你代表全班同学把礼物赠送给他，并给他留了一封信，内容包括：1.感激之情；2.礼物寓意；3.美好祝愿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：monitor of the class（这个班的班长）；express our sincere gratitude to you（向你表达我们真挚的谢意）；be of great importance to our further study（对我们的进一步学习很重要）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。