Question

7．假如你是高中生李华，从美国来的交流生Peter将寄住在你家，他将于近日乘飞机抵达你所在的城市，请你写信给Peter了解下列事宜．
1．飞机航班号以及到达的具体时间；2．在中国停留的时间；3．饮食和居住有无特殊的要求；4．如果情况有变请及时告知．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China and studying with us for some time．------
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是高中生李华，从美国来的交流生Peter将寄住在你家，他将于近日乘飞机抵达你所在的城市，请你写信给Peter了解下列事宜，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：飞机航班号以及到达的具体时间；在中国停留的时间；饮食和居住有无特殊的要求；如果情况有变请及时告知． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：in order to以便，为了；make sure确保；have a good time过的愉快；pick up接，搭载；besides另外；as soon as possible尽可能的快In order to make sure you have a good time here，I'd like to know the following things．（高分句型一）
Since I will pick you up at the airport，it's very important that you let me know your flight number and the time of your arrival in advance．（高分句型二）Once there are any changes of your plan，please inform me as soon as possible．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to hear that you are coming to China and studying with us for some time．In order to make sure you have a good time here，I'd like to know the following things．（高分句型一）
      Since I will pick you up at the airport，it's very important that you let me know your flight number and the time of your arrival in advance．（高分句型二）Besides，I am wondering how long you are going to stay in China．And when living at my home，do you have any special requirements for your accommodation and what you eat？Once there are any changes of your plan，please inform me as soon as possible．（高分句型三）
       I can't wait to see you and I am looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．