Question

任务型写作

   请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　[任务说明]

　　你要参加一场英语辩论赛，主题是“学生的学习错误该不该改正”。在参赛之前，你要查阅相关资料，并准备你的辩论发言。请认真阅读下面的短文，然后完成以下的任务。

1）概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约60；

2）就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约90；

a)　以英语学习为例，简述你学习过程中经常出现的语言错误；

b)　你是如何看待自己的语言错误；

c)　你的老师如何对待你的语言错误；

d)　你对老师的做法持什么看法？为什么？

　　[写作要求]

　　你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。

　　[阅读材料]

　　Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others’ language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other people’s. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.

Answer 1

Possible version 1

                    Students’ Mistakes should Be Corrected by Their Teachers

     ①Some people think that children’s learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers. ②Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including their speech, with more skilled people. ③But in school teachers always point out and correct their students’ mistakes for them, making the students dependent on them. ④So children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.

     ⑤This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. ⑥In real school learning situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without teachers’ correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it. ⑦I, for example, liked to use words that are too formal for a student’s composition. ⑧But I never realizing it until my teachers repeatedly replaced them with simple words. ⑨Now, I can writer naturally in simple English. ⑩So teachers should be encouraged to correct their students’ mistakes as soon as possible .

Possible version 2

Children learn everything by finding and correcting the mistakes. For example, when they are learning a language, they will compare their language with other people’s and make some changes if necessary. But in schools, students never have the chance to correct themselves because the teachers have done all the things for them. That is why students can not become independent in schools.

 In my opinion, it is right for the teachers to correct the student’s language mistakes. When I was learning English in junior high school, I always wrote the wrong sentence “I very much like English” because I took it for granted that languages have the same word order. Having noticed my mistakes several times, my teacher, Mr. Li, wrote in my exercise book: English and Chinese have different word orders. Please use English word order to write English sentences.” After that, I paid more attention to the word order of English and I rarely made such mistakes from then on. I should thank my teacher for correcting my mistakes in time.