Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请你根据以下信息，向编辑介绍一位伟大的人物。

姓名:Mark Twain

出生日期：1835年11月30日

职业：作家

生平：出生于美国乡村。11岁时父亲去世。年轻时做过工人、记者等。一生中出版过许多小说。1910年4月21日因病逝世。

性格特征：聪明，幽默。

参考词汇：出版publish幽默的humorous

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear editor.

I’d like to introduce a great man to you.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’d like to introduce a great man to you.

Mark Twain, an American man, was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30, 1835. He is known to the world as a great writer. Unluckily, his father died when he was 11 years old. However, he was always positive toward life. As a young man, he did different jobs, such as a worker and a reporter. He was fond of writing all the time. As a result, many novels were published in his life. He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21, 1910.

Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇邮件，文章内容要点已经给出，同学们在写邮件的过程中应该注意几点：

1.邮件的格式正确性，信件开头和结尾格式较为固定，但根据题干要求，写信对象的不同可稍作调整。例如本题中，收件人为编辑，落款为李华。

2.写邮件一般开门见山，交代写邮件的原因，便于读信人了解邮件重点。在本篇文章中，首先就交代了写信的原因“I’d like to introduce a great man to you.”

3.注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，既满足题目要求又能把内容表达清楚。范文从马克吐温的背景开始介绍，并介绍了他的一些杰出的成就，内容连贯通畅。

【范文亮点】

优秀词汇和短语：be known to the world 被世界所知，Unluckily不幸的是，be positive toward life积极应对生活，such as例如，be fond of热爱，As a result所以。

优秀句式和行文脉络：

1. He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21, 1910.这句使用了一个固定搭配“devote to奉献于”，体现了马克吐温的伟大贡献。

2.全文运用了Unluckily，However，As a result这些连接词使行文流畅。而且全文逻辑清晰，观点鲜明，最后还写出对马克吐温概括性的评价“Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever.”，这些细节处理的很好。