Question

10月1日国庆节，梦想中学(Dream Senior High School)的高三（17）班的学生志愿Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去“残疾人之家”（Family of the Disabled）开展志愿者活动（送水果、洗衣服、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。
1.时间、地点、任务、活动；
2.残疾人的反应；
3.简短评论。
注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Disabled
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Disabled
On National Day,Li Yue and Zhang Hua,students from Class Seventeen,Grade Three,Dream senior High Schlool,went to Family of the Disabled and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival,Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the disabled with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows ,washing clothes and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the disabled people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the disabled people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own 
lives.
By Chen Jie,
School Newspaper

解析试题分析：1.考生仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。 3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文章结构清楚，有条理，并使用了非常好的词语和句子为文章增色不少，比如did some voluntary work，Upon their arrival.; presented the disabled with flowers and fruits …, Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the disabled people.以及what及when引导的从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：and，then等等。值得学习借鉴。
考点：提纲作文。