| 家长 | 生活上的照顾 |
| 学校 | 提供了方便(延长图书馆和教室的开放时间…) |
| 老师 | 学习上给予的帮助(鼓励,答疑解难…) |
| 你自己 | 感受和打算,至少两点 |
分析 文章题材和体裁已经给出,无需考生过多考虑.而考生重点要注意审题,只有做好了审题环节才能保证写作的有效性和目的性.审题主要要做到以下几点:①分清层次和段落,切勿平铺直叙,"一逗到底".②句式﹑词汇要尽量多样,恰当使用较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇.③文章衔接紧密,过渡自然,恰当使用好连接词或过渡性词汇.④注意书写的整齐、美观,并正确使用标点符号.
【亮点说明】这篇范文使用了高中教材中出现的词汇,短语,语法,句式,如:At school,all the teachers work very hard,encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study.这句话用了现在分词做状语,Whenever we meet with difficulties,they are ready to come to our help.这句话用了让步状语从句,our school also provides good facilities for us students,for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends.这句话用了provide sth for sb"提供某人某物",At home,our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy.这句话用了so that…引导的目的状语从句,I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers.I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam.这两句话都用了不定式,还有范文中还有Meanwhile,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯.
解答 I'm a senior 3 student.The college entrance exam is on the way and everyone around us is trying their best to help us in different ways.At school,all the teachers work very hard,encouraging us to build up our confidence and inspiring us to improve our study.(高分句型)Whenever we meet with difficulties,they are ready to come to our help.(高分句型)Meanwhile,our school also provides good facilities for us students,for example the library stays open in the evenings and even on the weekends.At home,our parents take good care of us and make sure we are well fed so that we can always be full of energy.(高分句型)
I'm very grateful for the efforts of our parents and teachers.I'm determined to try my best to prepare for the exam.I am sure that with their encouragement and timely help I'll be able to achieve my goal and be a useful person of our society in the near future.(高分句型)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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