Question

【题目】为了帮助中学生健康成长,我校英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是该栏目的编辑李华,收到一封署名为Jamie的求助信。信中Jamie向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给他写一封回信。

内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3.信的开头与结尾已拟好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇：temper n.脾气,情绪

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】普通范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.①Everyone may have such bad times, so don't worry too much about it. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.②Here are three useful tips:

First of all,③talk to others about your problems.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,④go out and play games with your friends. It can help you relax.Third,⑤always believe that good things will happen in the future.⑥In this way, you may stay happy and be full of energy most of the time.

⑦I hope you will feel better soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

高级范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.①Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, don't feel too bad.You should learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.②I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

First,③don't keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others,which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,④go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger.Third,⑤remain optimistic about your future.⑥Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

⑦I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一封针对求助信写的回信。写作时，要写清要点，包括：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由，要用一般现在时态，以第一人称来表述．

重点短语和句型：

Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, don't feel too bad.使用ups and downs代替bad times更加生动形象。

I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.更具建议性。

First, ③don't keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Share something with somebody与某人分享某事。

Second, ④go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger. 使用which引导定语从句。

Third, ⑤remain optimistic about your future. ⑥Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits. remain optimistic about对…保持乐观。

使用first，second，third体现条理性。

⑦I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Feel calmer比feel better更好。