Question

【题目】假如你是李华，有一天周末和几个同学一起去爬山，看到有人在山上用网捉鸟。有必要向WWF反映这一情况。请写封邮件，内容包括：

1.山上看到的情况； 2.保护鸟类的原因； 3.保护措施。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．邮件开头和结尾已经为写好，不算作总词数。

Dear WWF,

I am Li Hua, one of a middle school students. I am writing to _______________________________________

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear WWF,

I’m Li Hua, one of a high school students. I am writing to inform you of the situation where the birds are living. Some people are catching the lovely birds in the woods on the top of the mountain in our area. What’s worse, a few people even put birds on tables for dinner

It is known that animals and birds are human beings’ friends. We are to live harmoniously with them. For one thing, they can catch pests of the plants for farmers. For another, without birds our forests would not be lively and our envorienment would miss a friendly member.

In order to protect birds from being caught or killed, we should widely spread the laws of animal protection .Besides, education and raising people’s awareness are effective measures.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇邮件类作文。本文要求考生以李华的名义给WWF世界自然基金会写一封信，向WWF反映有人在山上用网捉鸟这一情况。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全：（1）. 山上看到的情况…；（2）. 保护鸟类的原因…；（3）. 保护措施…。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇on the top of，harmoniously，spread，awareness,和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词What’s worse、For one thing,、For another, Besides,插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。注意次数：80—120之间。

【范文亮点】①I am writing to inform you of the situation where the birds are living..定语从句结构；②It is known that animals and birds are human beings’ friends.主语从句结构。