Question

【题目】书面表达

请认真观察下面的图片，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

注意: 1.词数150左右;2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文通顺连贯;3.短文应包括图片中所有内容。

Answer 1

【答案】As we can see in the picture, a boy sits in a cage like a bird, looking unhappily at his father, who sits opposite to him, looking puzzled on his face. There is a piece of paper which says “summer vacation”. The boy plans to go fishing, play football, climb mountains, go out for a ride and play chess. But the father keeps him in a cage for “safety” for fear of a car accident, drowning, falling off a tree, fighting or being deceived.

It reflects the way in which the parents protect their children from dangers while the children are growing up. Is it a good way to do that? I don’t agree. It seems to be safe staying in the cage. But the little boy will never know what a danger is and how to deal with it. So he may not adapt to the surroundings on his own in the future.

In my opinion, the parents should let their children out into nature to enlarge their knowledge and widen their sights during their holidays.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求学生认真观察图片，描绘出图片中所有内容并适当增加细节。

第一步，根据文章内容，确定时态。本文为一般现在时。

第二步，确定文章结构。本文结构为三段式：第一段描绘出图片中所有内容；第二段写出图片中隐含的意义；第三段表示自己的观点。

第三步，列提纲。主要针对描绘图片内容部分列出重点单词或短语：in a cage (在笼子里); sits opposite to sb. (坐在某人对面); a piece of paper (一张纸); go fishing (钓鱼); climb mountains (爬山); go out for a ride (骑车出行); play chess (下象棋); car accident (车祸); drowning (溺死); falling off a tree (从树上掉下来); fighting (打架); deceive (欺骗)

第四步，连词成句，组句成文。

图画作文给考生自由发挥的空间比较大，对考生的综合能力要求比较高，要求考生有很强的布局谋篇的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成图画作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或句型，在自己的能力范围之内，要适当的使用高级句型。同时要选用恰当的连接词，让文章更加通顺连贯。在发表个人观点的时候，可以选用英文格言来提升文章层次。