Question

假定你是你们班的班长李华。来自澳大利亚的高中生访问团一行20人明天上午将到你们班经行交流，请你根据下列内容提示用英语写一篇发言稿。

表示欢迎；2.班级简介；3.同学特点；4.学校生活；5.表达愿望。

注意：

次数：100左右（开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）；

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

不要在发言稿中使用你的真实姓名和学校的名字。

Dear friends,

Good morning! I’m Li Hua, monitor of our class.

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Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear friends,

Good morning! I’m Li Hua, monitor of our class. On behalf of our class, I’m much honored to give you a warm welcome.

First, I’d like to introduce our class. There are 50 students altogether, 23 boys and 27 girls. We’re one of the top classes in our school. Every student is friendly, active, hard-working and confident. We have 4 classes in the morning and 2 in the afternoon on weekdays. Besides studies, we have a variety of associations, such as the drama club, the music club and the reading bar and so on. We also take part in various sports in the afternoon.

I hope we’ll learn about each other and become friends through the communication. I believe you will enjoy your stay here and have great fun.

Thank you!

【解析】

该书面表达要求明确即写一篇发言稿。首先：结合要点，划分段落层次。 经分析，可以将表示欢迎、表达愿望分别单独成段表述，将班级简介、同学特点、学校生活集中在一段表述。其次：采用相应连接词，使文章衔接连贯。最后：利用课本所学词汇、短语、句式结合相应语法把文章内容丰富起来。

考点：提纲类文

【亮点说明】

1、发言稿固定句式：On behalf of our class, I’m much honored to give you a warm welcome.代表我班全体同学，我很荣幸地向你们表示热烈的欢迎。

2、描述人的词汇：friendly 友好的, active 积极的、活跃的, hard-working  勤奋的, confident 自信的

3、较高级的词汇和短语：such as 例如 ,and so on 等等, a variety of 各种各样的, association社团、协会.