Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, which was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, so she was born in China. It was interesting that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy about collect stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be a engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】have--had

【2】which---who

【3】in---at

【4】so--although

【5】All--Both

【6】collect---collecting

【7】the football--football

【8】a--an

【9】harder--hard

【10】laughing--laugh

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于人物描述类，描述了自己的一个同学。

【1】have—had 考察动词时态。根据整篇文章可知，作者描述过去的事情，故用一般过去时，故用had。

【2】which---who 考察定语从句关系词。本句为定语从句，修饰classmate，关系词在从句中作主语，故用who。

【3】in---at 考察介词。此处为固定短语be good at擅长，故用at。

【4】so—although 考察状语从句引导词。前后两句的逻辑关系属于让步关系，故改为although。

【5】All—Both 考察代词。根据上下文可知，作者指的是其父母两人，故用both，all用于三者或者三者以上，故用both。

【6】collect---collecting 考察动词非谓语形式。此处为be crazy about doing，后接doing，故用collecting。

【7】the football—football 考察冠词。踢足球为play football，不用定冠词the。

【8】a—an 考察冠词。Engineer 为元音发音开头，故用不定冠词an。

【9】harder—hard 考察副词。根据上下文可知，此句没有包含比较含义，故不用比较级，故用hard。

【10】laughing—laugh 考察动词非谓语形式。此句为结构make sb do sth，所以需用不带to的不定式，故用laugh。