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3．假如你是天水市市某一中学高一学生李华，一直和你在美国留学的姐姐李花（英文名Flora）练习用英语通信．请用英语写一封电子邮件告诉她近况，内容包括：
1．询问姐姐近况；2．告诉姐姐你的生活、学习状况以及父母健康状况．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
Dear Flora，
How are you？I am writing to you again becauseI am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）Are you still missing the unique snacks in our hometown？Do you still need to read piles of books every week？
As for myself，things are going rather smoothly．I have fallen in love with my school and have played an active role in the students'basketball games recently．I often go out with my classmates as volunteers to help children in village schools to learn English on weekends．Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）Don't worry．
Looking forward to your reply．Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是天水市市某一中学高一学生李华，一直和你在美国留学的姐姐李花（英文名Flora）练习用英语通信．请用英语写一封电子邮件告诉她近况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：询问姐姐近况；告诉姐姐你的生活、学习状况以及父母健康状况．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be eager to 渴望做某事；As for至于，关于；fall in love with爱上；play an active role 起积极的作用；
Thanks to幸亏，由于；make great progress取得巨大进步；Look forward to盼望；
I am writing to you again because I am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）
Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Flora，
      How are you？I am writing to you again because I am eager to know how is everything going with you．（高分句型一）Are you still missing the unique snacks in our hometown？Do you still need to read piles of books every week？
      As for myself，things are going rather smoothly．I have fallen in love with my school and have played an active role in the students'basketball games recently．I often go out with my classmates as volunteers to help children in village schools to learn English on weekends．Thanks to your help，I have made great progress in English．（高分句型二）
      Dad and mum，who are always talking about you and concerned about my school life，are both in good health．（高分句型三）Don't worry．
      Looking forward to your reply．Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．