Question

4．假如你是李明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到很难过．请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络．
注意：
1．信中要包括下表中的所有内容；
2．词数：120左右；
3．（答题卷）信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
4．参考词汇：sense of judgment（判断力）

事由	教室内的电脑不能上网，建议学校开通网络．
原因	1．有利于查找资料； 2．浏览新闻，了解信息； 3．作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力．

Dear Headmaster，
I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom．
                                                          ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络．本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一二人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少．动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．
We knFirst of all，we can surf the Internet for a wide range of learning resources in a short time without working hard in the library．（高分句型）
Furthermore，during the lunchtime，we can communicate with our foreign friends，sharing our experiences，cultures and studies through the Internet．（高分句型）
 We know you're afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites or spend too much time playing games online．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom．We know you're afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites or spend too much time playing games online．（高分句型） Personally，I think surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages．
     First of all，we can surf the Internet for a wide range of learning resources in a short time without working hard in the library．（高分句型）Furthermore，during the lunchtime，we can communicate with our foreign friends，sharing our experiences，cultures and studies through the Internet．（高分句型）This way，we can improve our language skills by chatting online．Last but not least，as high school students，we are old and wise enough to tell right from wrong．Believe in us and we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites．
     I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and let us get access to the Internet at school．（高分句型）
     Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Ming

点评 做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．