Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你的好友王琳代表你们班参加市里举行的中学生英语口语竞赛并获得了一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，内容要包括以下几点：

1.对她的成功表示祝贺；

2.说明她取得成功的原因；

3.请她告诉你学习英语的经验。

注意：1.词数不少于100；邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数；

2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m just so glad to hear that you have won the–first prize in the Oral English Competition

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m just so glad to hear that you have won the–first prize in the Oral English Competition.

It’s really good news for us and we are all proud of you. Congratulations on your success and best wishes for your future progress in English!

As we all know, it’s not easy to get such a great achievement as so many good students took part in it. You are really outstanding. You are always working hard and your success proves that diligence can bring fruitful results. Your success has set a good model for us all. We are looking forward to seeing you in the classroom and we want you to give us a report on how to learn English well. As you know, I’m not good at English, so I’m eager to improve my English by learning from your experience. I’ll be grateful for your kind help!

Congratulations again!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性的书信类作文。

在写作时要注意一下几点;

1. 格式要正确。书信的格式要求前面有抬头，后面有落款。

2. 时态要准确。通过审题可知本文的主体时态是一般现在时态。而且采用第一人称。

3. 要点要明确。要求中的三点都要有所涉及。在成功经验发明有适当发挥使文章更丰满。

4. 结构要紧凑。恰当的使用As we all know, As you know 等过渡性性词汇使文章结构紧凑。

5. 书写要美观。