Question

【题目】假设你是李华，请就“2017年北京市将大力推动青少年冰雪运动发展，包括把冰雪项目作为中小学生体育课的必修内容。”请就这一提议写一篇关于在中小学生开展体育课的重要性。

内容要点：

1.说明健康的重要性。

2.用个人经历说明运动的好处。

3.号召中小学生锻炼起来。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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Answer 1

【答案】As the proverb goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” From this, we know that health is very important to everybody, especially to teenagers. But how to keep fit? As far as I’m concerned, doing physical exercise has lots of advantages.

First of all, doing exercise in the morning will refresh my body as well as give me a good appetite to eat my breakfast. What’s more, the air in the morning is really fresh and clean, so I can keep my mind active in the class. By doing physical exercise every day I can keep my mind alert that I can finish my tasks in time. Secondly, doing exercise every day will help me to develop a better personality. It takes time and patience to do exercise. Doing physical exercise makes me stronger and healthier. That’s my personal experience.

As a student, sports are important. You can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day. Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body.

【解析】试题分析：本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文根据提示可概括为三段式：第一段引出话题，强调健康的好处；第二段是本文的主体部分，详细描述运动的好处，并用自己的经历来说明以增加说服力；第三段号召中小学生锻炼，语言应具有鼓动性。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。习语的使用：“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”宾语从句的使用：we know that health is very important to everybody；倒装句的使用：Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body。