Question

假定你是吉安一中学生李华。在一位名叫Mrs. Worried的学生家长的微博上，你看到如下内容：

I am the mother of a sixteen-year-old boy. Recently I find it becomes more and more difficult to communicate with my son. He always sticks to his own way of doing things，refusing to listen to his father and me. The tendency of his being too independent really worries me. I simply don’t know what to do. Can anybody help me?

请给这位家长写一封信。要求包括以下要点：

1. 自己的看法；2. 陈述理由；3. 提出建议。

要求：  

1. 词数130左右；

2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

   From what you said，I know that you are quite worried about your son sticking to his own ways of doing things. In my opinion，this is one of the process of teenages growing up. As time goes on，they will be aware of the disadvantage of their behavior and change themselves gradually. SO long as they are directed properly.

At the same time you should have the idea that being independent can be of great value for children and make the teens mature more quickly. And they can learn something through life itself. Even though they make some errors.

What you should do is direct your son properly so that he can trust you. Meanwhile，have a talk with your son now and then emphsizing the importance of following others’ advice. In a word，try to teach him to learn the world... 

Best wishes

LI Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于半开放性作文，要求考生根据原信内容筛选出自己要表达的要点，再组织好语言，可以从父母与孩子交流的方式方法，多从各方面关心孩子。要选择合适的时间来与孩子交流。以及在交流的时候注意语气和形式。

考点：考查半开放性作文

点评：本文的要求较高，需要学生自己组织考点，梳理出所要表达的内容。写之前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。