Question

16．最近一项健康调查表明，中学生的健康状况不容乐观．假设你是阳光外国语学校学生李华．为引起学生们对健康的重视，你校将举办一场英语演讲比赛，主题为"How to Keep Healthy"．请你参照下列要点写一篇演讲稿，准备参赛．
1．简述现状；
2．分析原因；
3．提出建议．
注意：1．词数100左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）：
      2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
可能用到的生词：营养不良 malnutrition  n．
                近视  near-sightedness  n．
                           How to Keep Healthy
     A survey on health is conducted in some high schools recently．
                                                                                                

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文写作．演讲稿要注意口语话特征，要点要写全，包括现状，原因和建议．文章是要表达看法，要以第一人称来写．时态以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
Overweight 肥胖
a lack of 缺少
improper diet 不当饮食
rather than 而不是
contribute to 对…有利
It is reported that the health of students in high school is not as good as supposed to be．
常用句型：it is reported that…据报道．
To change the situation，I will give the following advice．
动词不定式作目的状语．
we should have a healthy diet，especially fresh vegetables and fruit rather than snacks or fast food．
rather than连接对等结构，表示转折．

解答 参考范文
A survey on health is conducted in some high schools recently．It is reported that the health of students in high school is not as good as supposed to be．（高分句型一）Overweight，near-sightedness and malnutrition are common among students．（分析现状）
A lack of physical exercise，not enough rest and improper diet are the main reasons．To change the situation，I will give the following advice．（高分句型二）Firstly，we should have a healthy diet，especially fresh vegetables and fruit rather than snacks or fast food．（高分句型三）Secondly，physical exercise is a must for us to keep fit．Finally，a good rest and a sound sleep can refresh us for the next day．（解释原因）
In conclusion，proper diet，enough rest and regular exercise contribute to good health．（提出建议）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．