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第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Friendship with oneself is all important, because without it one cannot be friends with anyone else in the world.
We often focus on building relationships with others that we forget the essential first step: being friends of ourselves. That is the crucial first step if we are to have good relationships with others. How can we have good relationships with others if we don’t even have good relationship with ourselves?
Here are some tips:
1. Forgive yourself
You may have made those mistakes in the past, but is there anything you can do about them? I don’t think so, except learning from them. It’s true that you are not perfect, but neither is everybody else. It’s normal to make mistakes, so do yourself a favor by giving yourself forgiveness.
2. Focus on your strengths
Instead of focusing on your weaknesses, focus on your strengths. You always have some strengths which give you a unique combination nobody else have. Recognize your strengths and build your life around them.
3. Stop comparing yourself with others
You are unique. You can never be like other people, and neither can other people be like you. The way you measure your success is not determined by other people and what they achieve. Instead, it is determined by your own life purpose. You have everything you need to achieve your life purpose, so it’s useless to compare yourself with others.
[写作内容]
假设你的同学总觉得自己学习不如别人，因而产生自卑心理，请你写根据上面所提供的材料写一篇短文,用E-mail 发给他(她)：
1．以约30个词概括文章大意，说明首先要对善待自己的观点；
2．以约120个词表达你对他(她)的建议和希望，并包括如下要点：
(1) 分析他(她) 产生自卑心理的原因；
(2) 找出他(她)的优势；
(3) 提出合理建议。
[写作要求]            1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；       2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；  3．文章开头和结尾已写好。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that                                                 
_____________________________________________________________________With the best wishes!
Yours truly，
Wang Yan

Answer 1

[One possible version]
Dear Li Ping,
I’m glad that you trust me so much and tell me your true feeling, now I’ve read an article which says that it is important to be friendly to yourself first and then to others, and gives a few tips, such as forgiving yourself, realizing your virtues and not comparing with others.
As is known to all, no one is perfect，and everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, so if you fall behind others in some aspect, it’s natural and there’s nothing so serious as for you to feel frustrated. I know you’re  worried about your study because you’ve not got as good results as some of your classmates in the exams, but that’s not the most important, so long as you try your best, I’m sure you’ll make progress. Besides, You have your own virtues which some others don’t have, for example, you play basketball better than many other students in our school, and you also play the guitar well. How we envy you!
So never feel discouraged if you fall behind others in your study, and be sure you are good at many aspects.
With the best wishes!
Yours truly,
Wang Yan

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