Question

【题目】假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。

ASSISI ANTS WANTED

Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the senior students during the break．

Requirements attached：

1．Good at English．

2．Experienced priority．

Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163．com．

注意：

1．短文词数100字左右；

2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；

Dear Sir／Madam，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.

I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.

In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.

【解析】

【试题分析】这是一篇叙述性的求职信写作。依据题目及招聘广告所提供的信息，抓住广告上要求的两点来写求职信，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。要求：1．短文词数100字左右；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 【亮点说明】范文三部分，首先点明自己来应聘这一职位，其次介绍自己的情况，最后对以上内容简短总结并再次表明自己希望被聘用。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.宾语从句；I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.等定语从句；It would be appreciated if句型。还采用了一些比较好的短语，In addition，另外；In short简而言之；有条有理，避免文章比较单一，简单无味；同样有一些好的动词的固定搭配：am good at，looked after，’m available for如这些都给文章带来了亮点。