Question

随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的人选择走出家门去探索世界、体验生活。相较于传统的团队游，自助游越来越受到年轻人的青睐。但在享受自助游的同时，也存在一些问题。请按下列要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文：

1．自助游的优点和缺点；

2．你的观点。

参考词汇：团队游 package tour；自助游 self-organized tour；住宿 accommodation

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Answer 1

Compared with the traditional ones, self-organized tours are rapidly gaining popularity among the youth.

During a self-organized tour, arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depending on our own interests. Thus, we can spend the time freely and heard for our favorite destinations directly, only in which way can we fully expose ourselves to the local cultures and customs.

Nevertheless, self-arranged tour can bring about great inconvenience in the arrangements of transportation and accommodation. At the same time, the discounts for package tour may not be available. Also, lack of safety guarantees makes it easy to get hurt.

In my opinion, the advantages of self-organized tour seem to outweigh its disadvantages. Thus I suppose that self-organized tour can’t be a wiser choice to enjoy ourselves to the fullest.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，给出了一个话题“自助游“，并有部分的文字提示：包括1．自助游的优点和缺点； 2．你的观点。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：bring about 产生，to the fullest充分. 范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识：Compared with the traditional ones, self-organized tours are rapidly gaining popularity among the youth.这句话用了过去分词做状语， During a self-organized tour, arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depending on our own interests. 这句话用现在分词做状语，Thus, we can spend the time freely and heard for our favorite destinations directly, only in which way can we fully expose ourselves to the local cultures and customs.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和倒装句， Also, lack of safety guarantees makes it easy to get hurt. 这句话用了it做形式宾语。

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