Question

【题目】假如你是李明，你的加拿大网友John准备出国旅游，请你根据以下要点给他写封信，希望对他的海外旅游有所帮助：

1. 阅读旅游手册；

2. 留意天气变化；

3. 备好地图；

4. 与家人或朋友保持联系。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：guidebook 旅游手册

Dear John,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

Hearing that you are going to travel abroad, I’d like to give you some tips according to what I’ve just learned. I hope they may be helpful for you.

To begin with, you’d better buy a guidebook about the country you’re going to visit and read it carefully. It’s necessary to set down the important things. In addition, pay attention to changes in the weather, which will help in choosing the proper clothing for comfort. It also makes sense to get a reliable map. Last but not least, do keep in touch with your family or friends. Take care of yourself when face something unexpected.

All in all, with everything considered, you are sure to have a wonderful vacation abroad.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

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