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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ^ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class．Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature．They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature．They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains．But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking．Some hikers even lost their life．The other students in our class think not safe to organize such dangerous activities．They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

【1】【2】【3】【4】【5】

【6】【7】【8】【9】【10】

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】had—has

【2】or—and

【3】the去掉

【4】deep—deeply

【5】relaxing—relaxed

【6】ever—never

【7】because后加of

【8】life—lives

【9】think后加it

【10】which--that

【解析】

【1】没有一个过去的时间或者动作作为对比，故此句用现在完成时即可。

【2】连词or是选择关系，and是并列关系，根据句意应用and。

【3】nature不需要用冠词限定。

【4】Attracted这个动词需要用副词deeply（深深地）来修饰。

【5】主语是they （人），故表语要用过去分词。

【6】根据句意应该用否定。

【7】Because 后面接句子，because of 后面接短语。

【8】Life表示生命的时候是可数名词，由于前面有限定词their（他们的），故life要用复数形式。

【9】这是it作为形式宾语的用法。

【10】同位语从句要用that 来引导。