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【题目】近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。 1、列举不文明行为；2、指出其影响；3、提出建议。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、首句已给出，不计入总词数。

As a tour guide of an international travel agency，I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad．

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Answer 1

【答案】

As a tour guide of an international travel agency, I find it so embarrassing to see many Chinese tourists behave badly abroad. They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights. Such bad behavior overseas has caused great damage to the image of the Chinese people and our country as well.

Measures should be taken to stop this. First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs. Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places. I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country.

【解析】

试题分析：近来，中国游客在海外的不文明行为倍受争议。假设你是李华，一名国际旅行社的导游，就此写一篇短文在一份英文报纸上发表自己的观点。请根据下面的提示完成作文。 1、列举不文明行为；2、指出其影响；3、提出建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1、词数100左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、首句已给出，不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】They speak loudly in public places, carve characters on tourist attractions, throw rubbish, spit everywhere, and even cross the road ignoring the traffic lights.句中使用了并列谓语；Measures should be taken to stop this.被动语态在句中体现；First, before going abroad, tourists should be trained to obey social and public order, and respect local religions and customs.现在分词和被动语态在句中同时出现；Besides, it is a good idea to teach kids to be responsible citizens from kindergarten days. It是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式短语；Last, laws should be made to punish those who behave badly in public places.句中运用定语从句；I hope soon tourists overseas will change their behavior and win respect for themselves and our country. 最后一句使用了宾语从句。