假定你叫李华,准备写信给学英语报社编辑,反映你最近生活中所遇到的烦恼。
要点如下:
最近遇到一些问题,不知好听何做,希望得到帮助。
你这几年一直是校队很棒的篮球运动员,教练认为你将来有望成为球星。
你父母认为你学习一般,应该在学习上多花时间提高成绩,这样才能上好大学。训练或参加比赛占据了你太多时间,所以没有更多时间用来学习,为此,他们很生气,不允许你参加训练或比赛。
你自己的观念:十分喜欢打球,希望多得到锻炼,成为超级明星。
注意:1.内容应包括提示的全部要点;(请不要逐句翻译以上要点)
2.词数在100左右;
词汇 :编辑:editor 教练: coach 训练: train 超级明星:super star
Dear editor,
I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One Possible Version
Dear editor,
I have had a problem recently and I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.
I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades. In this way, I can go to a good university in the future.
However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games. They are angry with me and don’t allow me to do it again.
As for me,I like basketball and I hoped I will be well trained and become a super star.
Look forward to getting your advice soon.
Yours,
Li Hong
【解析】
试题分析:书信应该遵循书信的写作格式,有称呼,正文,结束语。正文是书信的主要部分。称呼语下方开始写正文。正文要言之有物、内容清晰、语言简练、态度谦逊。写给报社编辑的信要根据自己的实际情况,力求详细,诚恳的叙述自己的事情。书信不用很多陈腐词句和无聊套语,力求通俗、简化。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后,用词要得体,符合语言环境。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.Look forward to,it always takes me a lot of time to practice and take part in games.还运用了so引导的结果状语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:In this way, However,As you know,As for me, 等等。
考点:提纲作文。
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