Question

4．假如你是李明，来自美国的交换生Martin 在过去的一个月在你们学校学习生活．现在即将返回美国．请你根据以下内容用英语写一篇欢送词．
1．赞扬他是一位善良友好，乐于助人的男孩，而且篮球也打得很好；
2．非常怀念和他相处的快乐时光；
3．感谢他对大家的英语学习的帮助；
4．希望他再次有机会来到中国成都，到时一定陪他一起去游览成都的名胜古迹．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：名胜古迹 places of interest and historical sites
Dear teachers and friends，
I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．
．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．
True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇欢送词．感觉题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二赞扬Martin的优点，怀念和他相处的快乐时光并且感谢他对大家的英语学习的帮助；三希望他再次有机会来到中国成都，到时一定陪他一起去游览成都的名胜古迹．高分句型：1．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．句子里 who引导定语从句 is good at playing basketball，代指先行词a very kind，helpful and friendly boy．是一位善良友好，乐于助人的男孩，他篮球也打得很好．
2．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．句子里Whenever引导让步状语从句 we have trouble learning English，表示"无论何时"； hesitate to表示"犹豫去做"；since引导时间状语从句 he came to our class，表示"自从"．只要我们英语有困难，他总是毫不迟疑的帮助我们．所以自从他来到我们班，我们的英语已经被提高了许多．

解答 Dear teachers and friends
     I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．（点明主题）Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．【高分句型一】I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．【高分句型二】We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．（赞扬Martin的优点，怀念和他相处的快乐时光并且感谢他对大家的英语学习的帮助）
    True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．（希望他再次有机会来到中国成都，到时一定陪他一起去游览成都的名胜古迹．）
    That's all．Thank you!

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作完成以后，要通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误