Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir or Madam, 
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of the coming International Trade Exposition.
All our citizens are host for this great event. All of us should work hard to make well preparations for it. I promise I would try to serve for our honored guests from all over the world with enthusiasm. Besides, have a rich knowledge of Chinese history, I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendidly culture. What’s more, English, an international language, will play important role in communication during the Exposition. Unluckily, I am good at them and can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value the chance and do that I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Yours,
Susan

Answer 1

【小题1】host→hosts
【小题2】well→good
【小题3】will→would
【小题4】去掉for
【小题5】have→having
【小题6】splendidly→splendid
【小题7】加an
【小题8】Unluckily→Luckily
【小题9】them→it
【小题10】that→what/all

解析试题分析：
【小题1】All our citizens are host for this great event.host应用复数，与are和citizens对应。   
【小题2】All of us should work hard to make well preparations for itwell为副词，故应改为good形容词修饰preparations。
【小题3】I promise I would try to…promise为现在时，故应将would改为will，因宾语从句的时态发生在将来。
【小题4】…serve for our honored guests from… serve为及物动词，故应去掉for。
【小题5】Besides, have a rich knowledge of Chinese history…
该句的主语是I，为have的逻辑主语，故have应改为having。
【小题6】I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendidly culture.
只有形容词才能修饰名词culture，故splendidly为副词，应改为形容词splendid。
【小题7】What’s more, English, an international language, will play important role in communication…
play an important role in在……中起重要作用，故play后应加an。
【小题8】Unluckily, I am good…
根据逗号后的good at，Unluckily应改为Luckily。
【小题9】…good at them and can express myself…
前文提到的仅仅是English，故将them改为it。
【小题10】I will value the chance and do that I can if I could be accepted to be one.
Do后跟what引导的宾语从句，并在宾语从句中作宾语。故将that改为what或all（all作do的宾语，I can作定语从句）。
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