Question

15．假如你是中学生王平，现打算竞选你校国际青年志愿者组织新一届主席．请按以下提示，用英语写一篇参选演讲稿．
1．自己的性格及能力；               2．对该组织校内活动的设想；
3．对该组织国际交流活动的设想；    4．呼吁支持，做出承诺．
注意：1．词数：100字左右：演讲稿的开头及结尾已给出，不计入总此数．
      2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
参考词汇：竞选run for  国际青年志愿者组织  the International Youth Volunteers
Good afternoon，my dear friends!
My Name is Wang Ping． 
__________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Easy-going，supportive and decisive，I'm a man of strong leadership．
该句在表达自己性格时，使用了三个形容词，随和的、有支持的、有决策的做状语，修饰主语．
（高分句型二）I'll also contact American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection，which will probably offer us the chances to do volunteer work in America．
该句中which引导 一个非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词 American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection．
高级词汇：Easy-going，supportive and decisive随和的，有支持的、有决策的；influential 有影响力的；
Honored感到光荣的；

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends!
     My Name is Wang Ping．I'm here to run for Chairman of the International Youth Volunteers of our school．（高分句型一）Easy-going，supportive and decisive，（此处介绍自己性格） I'm a man of strong leadership．For the past months，I've helped our organization to carry out many successful and influential volunteering activities．Honored to be chairman，（我的设想）I'll invite some successful youngsters in volunteer work to present us lectures and share their amazing experiences as volunteers．Besides，（高分句型二）I'll also contact American Volunteer Organization in Wild Animal Protection，which will probably offer us the chances to do volunteer work in America．Dear friends，my performance will deserve your decision．（做出承诺）Please give me your support and you will see more success of our organization．Thank you!

点评 提纲作文实际上是对考生的思路以及文章的写作范围给出了明确的限定，因此考生在写作时，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥；要根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；注意句子的时态，词语的丰富和句型的多样性．