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3．研究发现，结识志趣相同的朋友，建立良好的社交网络，有益于我们的身心健康．但生活中，有一些人在情绪低落时不愿与人吐露．请根据你对右侧两幅图的理解，以"You Are Not Alone"为题，用英语写一篇作文．
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1．简要描述两幅图的内容；
2．举例说明你的经历和做法；
3．提出你的建议．
注意：
1．可参照图片适当发挥；
2．作文词数150左右；
3．作文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
参考词汇：mask （面具）   negative emotions （消极情绪）
You Are Not AloneAll of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions．But in Picture 1，the person tends to hide his negative emotions behind a mask．Luckily，in Picture 2，he gets over his negative feelings after talking to a friend．
In fact，everyone has different things that put them in negative emotions．For example，I used to feel nervous and worried before exams and become sad or disappointed if the grades weren't satisfying．But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out（高分句型一）．
Avoiding negative emotions is impossible．Yetmaking changes in our life can cut down on negative emotionsand having friendships can give us confidence that we matter（高分句型二）．Therefore，we should learn to become open to others．When we open our hearts and open our minds，new experiences will open up for us．（150 words）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out
但每次我生气了，我会求助我的老师、我的父母或朋友，他们总是及时的帮助我．
高分句型二：
Yet making changes in our life can cut down on negative emotions and having friendships can give us confidence that we matter．
但我们生活的变化可以减少负面情绪和友谊能给我们信心．

解答 One possible version：
You Are Not Alone
All of us need somebody with whom we can share our emotions．But in Picture 1，the person tends to hide his negative emotions behind a mask．Luckily，in Picture 2，he gets over his negative feelings after talking to a friend．
In fact，everyone has different things that put them in negative emotions．For example，I used to feel nervous and worried before exams and become sad or disappointed if the grades weren't satisfying．But each time I got upset，I would turn to my teachers，my parents or friends，who were always timely helping me out（高分句型一）．
Avoiding negative emotions is impossible．Yet making changes in our life can cut down on negative emotions and having friendships can give us confidence that we matter（高分句型二）．Therefore，we should learn to become open to others．When we open our hearts and open our minds，new experiences will open up for us．（150 words）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．