Question

【题目】请根据下图写一篇100-120词的短文。

要点：

1. 简要描写图画内容。

2. 说明图画的含义。

3. 谈谈你的看法。

注意：短文的开头已给出（不计字数）

In the picture, we can see that

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Answer 1

【答案】In the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and her grandmother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more ridiculous is that her mother even carries a first-aid kit for her.

In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents should not help their children too much. They should let their children be more independent.

Many parents share the opinion that they must get everything ready for their children so that their children could focus more on their study. They all fail to realize that with the help of this kind, children won’t be able to live their own life without their parents in the future.

Love and attention are needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much, or you will spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于看图作文写作。

考查看图作文写作，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。