Question

9月13日你和同学们作为志愿者参加了残奥会（The Paralympics）服务工作，请根据以下表格中的信息，叙述你们这次活动的全过程及感受。

时间	活动内容
早晨7：20	鸟巢国家体育场集合
上午7：30	进入鸟巢，打扫卫生
上午9：00----下午4：00	1、帮助残疾运动员作赛前准备 2、引导观众寻找座位 3、维持秩序
中午12：00----下午1：00	午餐、休息
下午4：00	活动结束，感受深刻

Answer 1

My classmates and I worked as volunteers in Beijing Paralympics on September 13.

Early in the morning at 7:20, we gathered at the National Stadium, the Bird Nest. As soon as we got into it at 7:30, we started to do some cleaning. From 9:00 am to 4:00 pm, we tried our best to help the disabled athletes to get ready for their competitors, lead the audience to their seats and keep order. It was not until 12:00 that we had lunch and took a rest, which lasted about an hour. We stopped working at 4:00.

Though it was a tiring job, we felt it an honor to serve the disabled friends from all over the world.

解析:

文笔要非常流畅，要把握所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明自己对志愿者工作的理解，以此来表达自己的决心。要用词恰当，表现要比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用要正确。